Profile Evaluation

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Personal Info:
Male
Age: 23
Dual citizenship (Canada / USA)
Nationality: Native American (I have a CDIB)

1) Work Experience:
During college I started a successful business. The business served 100's of customers and generated $10,000 - $20,000 in revenue annually. I won a start-up business competition at my school. Immediately after graduation I worked as an investment banking analyst at a start-up oil & gas
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